Feedbacks from Studio Visit
24 FEB CLAUDIA
-it is fine to exceed 4min
-in between of a specific documentation vs documented objectively
-there are four protesters in the film, have to include myself
-visually foreground the fish struggle
-fish=ppl in protest : make that clear, visually
-not every parts in narration is good, show the hopelessness
-pauses are good
-link the scene: pinning down of the boy to the eel scene
-try to overlap voices
-use sound record of actual protests
-shot something, 5 min
-very clear, underlying message, not just documentary
-crystallize them
-blue, ties everything
-elusive water, heavy mass, essence of the message
-talking fishes = interviewees
-show dates in sound design
-font
26 FEB MORGAN
-like the audio
-visual no, too static
-economy=fish?
-missing a villain, for the audience to feel the jeopardy and danger
- or else to lose, what is the risk?
-the essence of urgency ie what will happen if China influence HK?
-three interviews in three different styles, ie stop motion, toon boom, cut out
-animation is a lot of work , 7 min maybe too much
-realistic characters are better
-prepare a production sheet to schedule the progress
ie layers: keep in mind, tough to gage
status: In progress, done
duedate
-have a sound mixer
-morph for transition
-a map for the geographical setting, ie HK, surrounded by water
-secure the identity of the voices: talk to the sound mixer
-dont be BBC News, then what is the point of animation?
26 FEB MIKE
-point of view is built up
-can be stronger and shorter
-hard for someone who doesnt know the context
-easy to get lost when imagery is a close up
-fish talking: let ppl understand the metaphor
-different fishes hv their own colour scheme, way it sounds
-show a scene earlier: a fish fight to get back to water
-visually interesting
-smoking scene, live action
-no need to reinforce the intro. of the three interviewees with narration
-impacting visual in the beginning, then political message
-narration should be intentional, not explaining stuff
-a friend died scene, no sound
-show>tell
-use storyboard pro
-fish marching
-more wide shots, site specific ones, let the audience know where they are
-size/shape comparison among characters, to distinguish them easier
-half fish question in the market scene needs to be answered
-or else, start with another question
-history of conflict>establish the theme
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